Author: Heather Santoro
Editor: Kana Sonoda
Total Score for this Evaluation= pts.
Introduction=4/5 pts.
Your introduction attracts readers describing characteristics of school, district and community briefly. The best part of your introduction I like is quoting the principle of Barrington High School. However, your introduction doesn't include what aspects are being analyzed of school/district/community.
Organization=5/5 pts.
Your report starts with brief and attractive introduction and sections for the school, district and community. Each section has a lot of clear information.
Mechanics=5/5 pts.
Your reference section is clear and all information in the report is cited using APA styled-citations.
Conclusion=3/5 pts.
As for school analysis, your conclusion is clear, but it doesn't refer to community and district enough. You can add some short description of community and district such as some characteristics that you like to your conclsion if you like.
Editor: Kana Sonoda
Total Score for this Evaluation= pts.
Introduction=4/5 pts.
Your introduction attracts readers describing characteristics of school, district and community briefly. The best part of your introduction I like is quoting the principle of Barrington High School. However, your introduction doesn't include what aspects are being analyzed of school/district/community.
Organization=5/5 pts.
Your report starts with brief and attractive introduction and sections for the school, district and community. Each section has a lot of clear information.
Mechanics=5/5 pts.
Your reference section is clear and all information in the report is cited using APA styled-citations.
Conclusion=3/5 pts.
As for school analysis, your conclusion is clear, but it doesn't refer to community and district enough. You can add some short description of community and district such as some characteristics that you like to your conclsion if you like.
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